by ken28637
Liked your story as it gives the flavor of the intense sexual energy in a first time threesome.
...when you changed from past tense to present tense, right here:
[By this time my cock was at full attention, needing to be set free, sucked and to shoot a big load of cum into my wife's hot pussy.
About this time my wife says she needs to go to the bathroom and gets up and leaves the room, Jeb looks over at me and says, "Man she has some nice tits. I would love to see them, suck them, I bet she has a really hot pussy too, man I would love to bury my cock in her pussy."],
then your story changed from something that could have happened to you to a fantasy. And that reduces the heat. You're not the only stroke author that does that, but I find it very distracting. Just a suggestion: when you're proof-reading it, look for consistency of tense...and make it past tense for believability.
I like the idea that his sweet wife will take it up the ass to please her lover while sucking her husband's cock.
Good story and I hope to read more of he author's work.
You're both 100% gay dudes. Dump the girl, you have no idea what to do with her except shop for panties to share.
I love these stories. Unlike most of you reading this story my wife and I have played this way over 25 years and still love it. We have two very good male friends and have enjoyed years and years of hot sex.
"My wife, me and a friend have a night to remember."
Why would I want to continue reading a story when the description of it isn't even grammatically correct?