All Comments on 'Partners In Crime'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
blaa

exclamation marks are as annoying as cap letters.

Debmas1Debmas1almost 20 years ago
Feedback: Partners In Crime

Your story "Partners In Crime", is good for a bisexual story. I was disappointed to read my first lesbian story here today and it turned out to be a bisexual story put in a lesbian sex category? I picked Lesbian Sex Stories to read women who love women stories! I'm surprise that this site doesn't have a category for "Bisexual Sex", which is what your story is! But I guess that is what they call the "Group Sex" category?? But anyway, I do want to say, "Thanks for Sharing your story". Debmas1

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
whack

that is da best bi story yet brilliant twist in de end but a little bit dissappionted but who gives a shit dat was brill

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Please calm down.....

Your exclamation marks are EVERYWHERE, they are good at points, but not every sentence. This might have been a good story with the proper editor, but sadly, it was not.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good, but...

Has your keyboard lost the full stop and been replaced by an exclamation mark?! Makes an otherwise good story really hard to read.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Not as excited about it as the author obviously was.

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