All Comments on 'Anniversary Fantasy'

by sexy_mama_09

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PolyLvrPolyLvrover 12 years ago
not bad at all

There are quite a few mistakes: where, were, too many commas, etc. But the premise and various incidents were arousing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Oh!!! Hell Yea!!!

Damn near ALL my fantasies in one story sexy_momma_09

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Pathetic

I could care even less if I spelled a word or two wrong. When you stop part way into a story to destroy your brain with ILLEGAL drugs, you don't have time to spell check haha!

oops, correction, when you are too STUPID not to use such drugs you are also to ignorant and lazy to use spell check and be concerned about proper grammar. Just read. oops again, ATTEMPT to read my incoherent attempts to type something that only I could consider a story and then blame others for thinking what I have done, filled with countless errors, is their fault for seeing my stupidity and laziness, (hick, or whatever I am suppose to say when my speech is impaired with drugs).

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