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by twelveoone01/29/11

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got that one!
Mike, I think I mentioned this once before, you have good sensibilities, but express them in cliches. This one is getting more away from the cliche. Not totally new, but not tired either.
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by vrosej1001/31/11

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Twelveoone summed up my feelings well. You can write well but the cliches are getting you. Everytime you write something, think, 'Have I heard this before somewhere?', if you have, don't include it. I know this is tough ask but its one we must all bear. I posted this some else, but it applies here: Cliches are linguistic zombies that will eat the brains out of your poetry. Keep trying. Check out some of my early stuff. I sucked but I worked hard to better myself and now I don't stink entirely.

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