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Into the Jungle

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous04/03/11

i enjoyed the story

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by Anonymous08/09/11

Great Story

I really enjoyed this story, keep them coming.

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by Anonymous10/06/11

decent start, let's see some more development.

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by tap0495002/11/12

Not Bad :)

I enjoyed the story, but Olivia's dialog needs help.

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by Dracomage902/22/14

As Uncle Si Would say, "Naah!"

Not a very interesting premise. The entire story leaves much to be desired, however, if the author expanded upon it & made it more readable, it might actually do that which it was intended to do & provide entertainment.

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