Just the kind of office where I'd like to work instead of...
to a very interesting short story. I do feel this story would have been better if you had slowed it down added more to it. I hope you will follow up on this relationship.
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good stuff, good place...
Just the kind of office where I'd like to work instead of...
A VERY DIFFERENT START
to a very interesting short story. I do feel this story would have been better if you had slowed it down added more to it. I hope you will follow up on this relationship.
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Back to The Office of Desire or
More submissions by Bethyboo.