You reposted the story, as in there are two stories in this one both the same.
Its not a bad story and actually kind of sweet. Slow build-up, I am curious to see what happens next.
A family that lives together with honesty, integrity and real openess is difficult to find - you have exposed it to us. Now, let us see how you continue with it.
Very very good.
Kind of understanding aren't they, more parents should be like that, not joking. Imagine if parents had this much understanding in real life, there would be so much more productivity in society than there is today.
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You reposted the story, as in there are two stories in this one both the same.
Its not a bad story and actually kind of sweet. Slow build-up, I am curious to see what happens next.
Pretty good opening.
I really enjoyed reading that. Not everything has to be down and dirty the first time or anytime really. It was a good read. Five stars :)
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"Really," Pip asked in an almost disbelieving voice?
Why are you putting question marks after the sentence? It belongs after the dialog.
2 copies in one??
Great beginnings..... Thanks!!
SO many possibilities..... LOL
Keep writing!!
Absolutely Delightful
A family that lives together with honesty, integrity and real openess is difficult to find - you have exposed it to us. Now, let us see how you continue with it.
A nice story
Sweet and cute story that's nicely done,Thanks
Excellent story
Nice story, well told. Is it a prequel?
Hilarious!
Great story ~ Hilarious!
Charming, delightful and dare I say cute.
Looking forward to the next installment.
Read this after part two
Very very good.
Kind of understanding aren't they, more parents should be like that, not joking. Imagine if parents had this much understanding in real life, there would be so much more productivity in society than there is today.
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