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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/05/11

Even though...

Even though i knew where it was going, I still liked it.

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by Vulcan_in_Ohio02/05/11

Disappointed

This story belongs in fetish, or maybe transexual/crossdresser, not in anal. Anal was only a very tiny part of the story -- most of it centers around gender reversal. There is an undercurrent of impending gay sex coming up. There is really no character development and there is no explanation as-to why hubby would like to be feminized, pegged, etc. The story is in keeping with this author's other stories, just under the anal category . . .

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by Anonymous02/05/11

Really Enjoyed It!

Definitely a hot one! Very descriptive, building up in intensity to peak after peak after peak. Thanks, I totally enjoyed it!!

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by Anonymous02/07/11

Wow

What a turn on...I remember when I found out I could cum just by my wife fucking my ass. A total orgasm.

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by Anonymous02/08/11

i wish ,no pray, even

man i want to experience something like that so badly. i wish my wife would make my dreams come true the way his wife did.

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by Anonymous02/11/11

Very hot

Hi, this is a very hot story..

I think Pam was to buy a strap on with ejaculatory system... and put some semen stored in the freezer for the next session.

would be the stage for the real thing or another
or for a more detailed scene of how he goes crazy for semen


But anyway, very good and very hot history...

I hope the second part soon

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by CoupleFromOhio02/12/11

Great story. This is exactly what like in our marriage.

Very creative and erotic. I love it.

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by shaun404/17/11

cock ring

very hot story but i dont think you shoud have
a cock ring on for much more than 30min

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by Anonymous05/20/11

My fantasy

I always dreamed of sex like this but found it hard to tell my wife... I'm just going to let her read this and go from there!! Great story!!

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by Harry_Ballsack05/29/11

Fantastic Story

Wow, That kept me hard the entire time. Now if I could just get my wife to do that to me!

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by bunny_ears06/18/11

Deliciously Naughty.

Some of my deepest, darkest fantasies are told in this story, great writting, great story.

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by Ronnie_407/24/11

Terrific story.

Terrific story. I loved every bit of it. It’s always a pleasure to find role reversal story of this caliber. I loved the artful way her control emerges through the story. Her supremacy is so sexy and his path to feminization so complete. Please write more stories of this quality. It will be my pleasure to read them.

Thank you,

Ronnie

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by Anonymous02/07/12

Hot story

Very, very hot story! Loved it!

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by cpanlp04/13/12

GREAT STORY

fucking very hot story!
Reminded me of times with an old girl friend. Often she would tease me all day long talking about cocks and I too would b e looing at mens crotches. Wearing a cock ring all days is real sexual. I enjoy sucking my girl friend's strar on cock especially when wearing panties and stockings. She has told me she has a real power trip when she is wearing her dick and gets a real thrill watching my head bob up and down her shaft. she like to watch her dick pump in and out of my ass too. Me too.

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by Anonymous07/13/12

Amazing!!!!

seriously hot story & fantastic writing

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by pulse62712/02/12

LOVED IT!

I've been fucked like this... and it FEELS *JUST* as you describe!
Keep writing!

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by Anonymous12/27/12

omg!

Great story! Thanks!

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by Anonymous12/31/12

Give it to ME

Ooooooh, I'd luv to have that hard cock of yours in me. Maybe you'd eventually even get a well hung stud to join us so you could watch him fuck me. If that sounds good let me know at oldvintner@msn.com

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by Anonymous02/08/13

The Door.

That's what he SHOULD have shown her when she showed him her "toys". Don't let the door hit your ass on the way out bitch.

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by Cerebral_Caress02/23/13

wow - a rare 5-star

Speaking as one who is turned off by the thought of anal, THIS story proved a captivating and erotic surprise. I kept waiting for it to veer off course because I've grown sick and tired of erotica that starts off good or intriguing but ends up with the disgusting "wife turned into manipulative domme bitch humiliated husband" theme.
Instead, there was no changing personality to vulgar sneering put downs, no "embarrass and humiliate the wimp husband" theme, no "lets trash our vows and bring in a third party (gotta be a negro, of course, one of her coworkers who she's been doing on the side) and ignore threat of STD's" - just some down and dirty passion. Heck, even I'd be willing to let my wife try that if she wanted to spice things up, although I'd look so idiotic in lingerie she'd be laughing too much to keep the dong aimed towards the bullseye.
I am very glad the writer stopped where he did. No continued in Chapter 2, because these stories always seem to go right down the toilet as a writer hauls out the formulaic cheating wife/cuck husband crap.

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by Anonymous06/06/13

Do me please!!!!!

WOW!! That was soon hot!! I wish my wife would do me like that. I've asked for anal play, but no. I'm ready to finish myself again!! I guess I'll keep dreaming and hoping. I thought she was going to have a man finish him. WOW I loved it.

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by Anonymous08/13/13

Kick the bitch out

I wonder how much you enjoyed it when you took your bleeding ass to the hospital?
After taking stool softners for a month and sitting on a pillow for weeks, I think you'll understand what a degrading, manipulative bitch she really is. She obviously has demonstrated by her actions that she has no love or respect for you. Is there any answer other than divorce? What a big, painful pile this story was.

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by EgoTrixi10/25/13

WOW...

Anonymous..Anonymous...Ano....and so on. Nobody has balls enough to sign with his name but they all come out of their holes to congratulate.
Cheer up, guys! About 75% of Readers/Authors here on "Wimperotica" would love being degraded, cheated upon or forced to eat their own shit. While this site turn into being "Mekka" for wimpy cuckolds, ordinary readers turn to other sites. Rejoyce, you "guys": Soon you will have cuckerotica all on your own.

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by Anonymous11/03/13

Terrible story of abuse

Less than "1". And Ego-trixi? Everyone here is anonymous. Unless of course your real name is Ego Trixi. How strange would that be?

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by inQbus11/13/13

I wholeheartedly agree with what Cerebral_Caress said. I don't even like anal stories yet this is one of the few exceptions. Very well-written. A 5 from me!

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by Anonymous12/16/13

A manipulative self centered bitch

She has planned this out for her own gratification and would have done and said anything to get him to let her control and use him. Cock ring for a long time isn't healthy. And the rest? Kick the bitch to the curb. If she wants to be the man let her find a woman to screw. Terrible story.

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by Anonymous12/19/13

no

no gay for me, when you started the gay crap I stopped reading. good start then went to crap.

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by Anonymous12/23/13

awesome story

Great story in how a man let his WIFE play anal with him. Nothing gay about that you anonymous jerks. If stories like this is not your cup of tea then why in the hell are you even reading stories like this one!? This is one of the best I have read between husband and wife, especially since you did not degenerate the husband in any way. I am glad that you made it a nice exploration between the couple and it didn't deteriorate into name calling or put downs from the wife like some other stories out there. But again to those others this site can easily find what stories your into so why are you reading stories like this one if its not up your' alley?!

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by brick_stone12/26/13

Great story

He needs more.
Like getting fisted by his wife

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by Anonymous01/06/14

Dump the bitch

What man would stay with someone that hurts him? Just plain garbage.

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by Leprakan6602/11/14

Great story.....

And honestly playtime fantasy for the wife and I. While I don't quite know whether I am quite ready to become her Sissified Bitch (albeit by desire). Ass play and worship while not an every session thing, is a fun part of our sex life and when the kink comes out a major part of the session. No strap-on yet but several vibrators have been used on this man's ass (and no I have no desire for the real thing), I've licked and sucked a dildo soon to be used or being used on her, and no I don't think nor does she think I'm gay.

I stroked my cock through the entire story, and like the male in the story love pleasing my woman by licking her clean of my seed, and again I have no desire to eat someone else s cum from her body, though we do talk of me turning her out to take as many cocks as she can....but that is another story for another day.

All told this is a five star story favorited by me!!

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by Anonymous05/25/14

Then he realized she was abusing him.

He got out of bed, removed the ring, took a shower, packed and left the bitch. The next time she heard from him was when she was served with a petition for divorce.

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by Tootight107/15/14

loved it

the story time line is a bit close though, first time he ate his own cum first time he cleaned her pussy, first time he wore panties, first time he had a dildoe in his ass, first time for stockings. first time for a strap on. then not to mention that the wife, for some reason, had all this planned. I loved the story, and have done all of it, but the time line seems too tight. then I wonder about what the motivation, for the wife is. is there a goal she is trying to achieve, or a situation she is looking to accomplish. with this kind of time line, I would be very curious about what this significant other is up to.

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by daedricprince99907/18/14

wow

That was so incredibly HOT!!! Hope I can have that experience with my wife..

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by Anonymous08/27/14

more.

Yes it seems that there should be more. What was she up too. Were did she decide to do this too her husband. You need to write more chapters. I liked it but need out come. Why is she doing this to him? Thanks.

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by BrendaNW09/26/14

great story

Hot story.. write more please.. love to have a wonderful woman like that

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by Anonymous01/29/15

Overreactions

People this is FICTION! These are STORIES on this site. Can't you just comment on the story without critiquing the author and acting as if the CHARACTERS are real?

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by MartyFisher02/20/15

Totally fucking HOT!!!

Awesome writing style and story pacing. Would LOVE to have a wife like this to take me to those places I really want to go to! Excellent job - thanks for sharing!!

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by Tootight107/08/15

good story

2nd read, and still like it. I get the impression that they are a younger couple, and having a great time exploring themselves, bodies and minds. I know this is fiction, but it could be real also, somewhere. the only thing I would add to this story at this time would be some communication between the two, just to put some reality into it. this story could develop into in a 4 or 5 chapter story, with a loving husband and wife, let alone a successful marriage, now there's a novel idea, and a rarity.

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by Anonymous08/05/15

Even for fiction this was crap

She just springs it on him and he's okay with it? I don't think so. She's either outside on her ass in the gutter or looking up at him from the floor when he bitch slapped her. No communication = no marriage.

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by maddict09/25/15

So this is role reversal ?

A woman trapped in a man's body, and the best part a man trapped in a woman's body. Now I've ruined the moment thinking of Bruce Jennifer. ?

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by Anonymous11/02/15

great story

loved it

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by 13thChildofLeeds11/13/15

SO HOT

Love it!

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by bggb2901/01/16

dream woman for me

Very erotic. Putty in her hands

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by farnorthhot01/31/16

Great! Very very hot!

Wonderful writing, clear, clean, incredibly erotic.
Thank you so much!

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by DianeRedfern02/09/16

One of the Best

This was so hot I couldn't control myself. When I was still a man, I'd have done anything to have her for a wife. Keep writing about this couple please. I want more.

I also wish that people who write about being offended by female domination NOT read stories about female domination instead of trying to spoil the fun for the rest of us. That's just stupid and cruel people with nothing better to do with their time than spoil other people's fun and demean very gifted authors like you. Please keep writing.

Hugs & Kisses,
Di

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by Anonymous04/09/16

Wrong Category

The guy wants to suck cocks. This should be in Gays category!

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by Darkside61906/26/16

SO FUCKING HOT

i too am wearing a personalized cockring 24/7 with my Mistress's name on it, so i could definitely relate to that excitement he feels by that. Still waiting to enjoy being taken by a strap on, but i could live it all in your story. Not into guys being made to wear lingerie, but other than that i LOVED IT. Definitely sharing this with Mistress Scarlett. Thank you. More like it, PLEASE.

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by Anonymous07/08/16

The best I have ever read

I was almost a little dEsa pointed until I got to paget two and by page 3 I was cumming in my pants u have the most beautiful wife on earth to give u Ever thing a man could want

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by Anonymous09/01/16

Part 2

As the title says, waiting for part 2

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