All Comments on 'Closer Than Close Friends'

poor re-rewrite of an older, better story:

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/lesbian/highschool/friend-in-need

SHORT BUT SWEET

I'd forgotten about nifty--you've got a great memory! Thanks for the link. (Why people think plagiarism is somehow invisible I'll never get, ugh. This bs should still be deleted!)

I liked it :) Yes it migt be similar to another story but that doesn't change how good it was :L I agree, short but sweet

More heat. This reads like an anatomy manual. Keep writing.

i don't a story to be too long but not too short either. i'd like to hear about u and lolli with more details.

It was looking promising so it could be a really good story :) however it was full of cliches (the mom's reaction) and barely any description.

could have been a great story but you cut it so short