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Seriously, I thought my heart was going to give out.
LOL. For some reason I found this statement really funny. :) Cute and funny. Awwww...I feel so bad for Keith for feeling unwanted and what's up with Travis anyway? Is he just fooling around or something? I mean, he didn't really say or do anything to prevent Keith from leaving or some kind of an explanation maybe? *sighed* I just don't know.
I'm totally digging this story though and I can't wait for the next installment. Great job! :)
Lol at awkwardness =)
Loved the awkwardness of the final paragraphs and that you changed perspectives gave the story another little shot of freshness which was great! I'm really enjoying the story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next. =)
This is the most emotional part of he story so far. I feel bad for poor Keith but i hope it wors out.
Poor Keith. And poor Travis. I know Eric meant well, but sometimes friends should just shut up and back out.
felt keith's hurt
felt the awkwardness and angst, know what its like to be on the rebound and yes it hurts, I felt keith's hurt, well written
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