by MalePatternBoldness
...and I love your name, too!
I've not read something so beautifully crafted on here in a while. It takes skill to write a woman as raw and even crude as the muse, but I think you got her spot on.
You know, your story is so awesome. Beautifully written and such a turn-on. I even like the ending. And I hae seen how some writers try to emulate porn. But this is a plot, a story, and a beautifully written sex scene.
Hell Yeah, you deserve five stars!!! I hope to see more of your work, you have a follower of this story.
I love the randomness of the encounter... very well done with this, I will be checking in on your stories! :D
... I went back and voted '5'.
I WAS going to wait until I read the other 3 stories posted for this date, but your remark struck a chord deep inside. Because what you said is true anywhere, anytime, anywho.
From start to finish it kept me very interested. Loved the raw sex - done instantaneously --- I wanted to be in that jeep!
Very descriptive and very erotic, a lovely story well presented.
A beautiful erotic story, it just me want to say “yes please, my turn”. A sample of perfection.
Tess (UK)