I've not read something so beautifully crafted on here in a while. It takes skill to write a woman as raw and even crude as the muse, but I think you got her spot on.
You know, your story is so awesome. Beautifully written and such a turn-on. I even like the ending. And I hae seen how some writers try to emulate porn. But this is a plot, a story, and a beautifully written sex scene.
Hell Yeah, you deserve five stars!!! I hope to see more of your work, you have a follower of this story.
I love the randomness of the encounter... very well done with this, I will be checking in on your stories! :D
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Anonymous02/06/11
When I read your "Some words" entry...
... I went back and voted '5'.
I WAS going to wait until I read the other 3 stories posted for this date, but your remark struck a chord deep inside. Because what you said is true anywhere, anytime, anywho.
Had to read because of the title...
...and I love your name, too!
I've not read something so beautifully crafted on here in a while. It takes skill to write a woman as raw and even crude as the muse, but I think you got her spot on.
WOW!!!
You know, your story is so awesome. Beautifully written and such a turn-on. I even like the ending. And I hae seen how some writers try to emulate porn. But this is a plot, a story, and a beautifully written sex scene.
Hell Yeah, you deserve five stars!!! I hope to see more of your work, you have a follower of this story.
Damn
Well written. A lot of good stories on here, but this one is a 10
Very nice
I love the randomness of the encounter... very well done with this, I will be checking in on your stories! :D
When I read your "Some words" entry...
... I went back and voted '5'.
I WAS going to wait until I read the other 3 stories posted for this date, but your remark struck a chord deep inside. Because what you said is true anywhere, anytime, anywho.
Hot
From start to finish it kept me very interested. Loved the raw sex - done instantaneously --- I wanted to be in that jeep!
ahhhh
turned me on!!! only thing I have to say! and that is huge!
Wonderful story!
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