Poor Simon Ch. 01

Its hot so far.. I like how he's already being referred to with female pronouns. I can identify with him.

I'm not much for pain, but I'll follow along for the promise of pleasure.

curious

I know Simon was blinded by grief, but surely even through all of that he would have paused and been a little leery of someone he'd never met a day in his life claiming to be his uncle? I love your story line-- not the nonconsent but the rest of it. I am of the opinion that if your mind is not willing then its still rape b/c your body can be manipulated to respond.

I am curious to find out how this chubby guy chose Simon and who he really is...

*what type of prisoner suns herself by the pool instead of trying to escape?

Its very good for a first story & I wish you luck & success in this series :)

hi avidreader!

all i can tell you now is that all will be revealed... and i know that any kind of nonconsent is rape, but this is from the point of view of a very young innocent boy who is confused and grieving and terrified, his thoughts are not always clear.

thanks to everyone for commenting, ch. 2 is already out and 3 is on the way...

verry good.

Good, clear and understandable. like the story line.

Hi I am coming back to this again, as I read it before but couldn't quite get into it properly. I read Tenderness this morning and I thought I would come back to Poor Simon.
Starting again as I got up to Chapter 5 before I am possibly looking at it with clearer eyes and am impressed with the way the story unfolded and am hoping that there is a good outcome at the end lol.... onwards and upwards as they onto the next chapter...

lucky simon

Little Simon should just submit and enjoy himself.

Great start

Looking forward to to reading the rest