by Liar
and a great example for me of one of those poems I don't need to totally get: it just sounds lovely to say it. I will say though that I love how delicately what I think is the message is woven into the sound and dance, spiderweb tentative and beautiful.
poetry is what I have come to expect from you and I am never disappointed. Thank you for this lovely desert-scape on this chillingly cold day.
~maria
are a personal fav in poetry. These are vivid, along with feeling the air for acrid lungs.
I got death in the desert from this one. It's a ripper, full of juicy, creepy imagery and I love it. So vivid and evocative. Getting a recommend.
I had to slow down and read it again before the full glory hit me amd when I did I was entranced by how great a poem this is, every line a gem and it's going straight into my favourites
That may be Poet Guy's lazy reading. He apologizes for that.
Kind of dreamily good, in any case.