A Different Perspective Ch. 05

Nice ending

I've really enjoyed this story, this chapter was really nice too, but I kinda wish the ending wasn't so open ended, a little I love you quid pro quo wud'v been nice ;p All in all though, great effort, I can't wait to read what you come up with next =)

I think it would of been better if there was talk about moving and living in together or some sort of closure to them. I agree, the ending is too open and can be interpreted in many ways so closure would of been nice. You can definitely do another story as an update to them and such..that'd be a really nice touch.

You did a great job and great effort..I truly enjoyed reading this story and I hope you'll write more. Cheers!

nice ... but

feels kinda rushed

Perfect ending

Sometimes having a less storybook ending is great. This whole story has been so realistic, I'd have been disappointed if these realistic characters became cardboard romance characters, declaring true love and complete monogamy and getting married after dating for one week.

Way to stand up for your characters.

Thank you for not ruining the ending for us. I mean the ending was perfect. It didnt literally declare happily ever after but instead left it as they discovered it could work for them. I like it. As confusing as my comment must be. Lol

bloody excellent....... fantastic.?

Wow!!!

Great story viola47... and thanks to dinkyboots for having drag my attention to this very good story... I love all chapter by the way...

What a great story in forgiveness and starting over with someone new. Not to mention it was hot.