Sinning with Sister Ch. 03

Personally I like a good plot, sex only would ruin the good work so far. I also like the brother and sister to be closer romance wise. Mainly because i prefer her than chloe.

But yeah, i enjoy the teasing/ sexual tension. Dont change it

Cheers

Nice story

You got the emotions and feelings put into words very well, don't forget to add that in the climaxing sexual parts also, dump chloe and get matt and libby into a lovers mix, maybe even a preg libby? Your doing great but don't forget, detailed sex feelings and emotions, it makes us feel it is us. Good work so far.

Now I would like to see him come home drunk and end up watching his sister sleeping before becoming over taken with lust oushing him to take his sister.

Awesome story so far! You do it the way u want since your typing it! I know you will get to the incest, but just keeping going the way your going!

Keep it going

This is great the way it is. You are tyeasing the audience, and for one I love it. Keep up the good work.

Plot first

Just like with good sex an erotic story needs foreplay. Sex only is boring and lacks that lovely anticipation that stimulates the imagination and hopefully a little more.

Story!

Without the story the sex would be much less satisfying, stay the course!

good story

The change between the beginning and end of this chapter ROCKED!






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Rome Was Not Built In A Day

The story rocks, don't break it

This is all about tease,

Which just gives me the shits. Sorry, but too much teasing is a turn off. I mean that as a reader, by the way.

Oh, and it's hard to get into your characters, they lack both interesting qualities, and human touches. Sorry, just my opinion.

=)

Tbh i like the teasing..makes me wanna read on ^.

not good

worse the watching anime wich is real bad teasing is a real turn off as said before and what little plot there is is way to boring. your characters are one demensional and have no feelings or life to them, i don't think you are cut out to be a writer stick to your day job and reading.

I clearly recalled a particular incident in which she had guided my hand up underneath her ludicrously short miniskirt, only for me to pull it back and make an excuse, much to her frustration.

@@@ Ooooo.k. What. The. Fuck. Is wrong with you?!? I get being dense enough that the girl has to make the moves, hey, been there, lol. ...but you dont turn them down!! Omg! @@@

Despite the fact that I had fantasized about her countless times, once I knew that I could have her I was afraid of messing it up.

@@@ That is the lamest pile of crap ive ever heard! @@@

"If, hypothetically, she wasn't your sister, would you feel...?"

I cut her off abruptly. "She is my sister."

@@@ hey, I get dense... But damn, a kid could figure out that there was a point to her conversation that you should be getting, yeesh! Heh. @@@

Deciding that it had to be either James or Libby, in the end I chose my sister to avoid the mockery I would doubtless have to endure with the former. I had resolved to ask her how not to make a fool of myself with Chloe.

@@@ too late!! (Snickering) @@@

I positioned and she wrapped her arms around my shoulders intimately. Slowly I penetrated her until I was fully inside. This was sex as it was meant to be, with slick wet pussy and rock-hard cock.

@@@ (i'll skip the obvious mess he made with his sister, lol). ...thank gawd! I thought for sure he was going to back off at the last second and flake! I don't know if this will make it better or worse as the story progresses but.... Woo! @@@

She whispered hoarsely in my ear. "One more baby."

I took her again and then she was cumming, clinging to me for dear life whilst her walls fluttered around me. It was more than I could bear. I fired home, deep inside her as we became one for the first time.

@@@ Nice!! Five stars this round I think! I wish my girl worked up and fired off easy like that, lol. Im tempted next time I go down on her to stop right when she starts cumming and just slam deep in her in one go to finish her off... Though I dont know if A. It will work, or B. If she will kill me for stopping ;) @@@

Author's note 2: I've been thinking that I should switch over to a sex-only incest story. By that I mean skeleton plot only with minimal teasing. Personally I like a teasing sister, but I aim to please you. Leave an anonymous comment if you would prefer that.

@@@both are good, but I love a good story! I like the tease, as long as it isnt miserably drawn out, heh. ...and as long as the guy isnt being a douche constantly going on about how its wrong, your my sister, etc, you know, all the stuff he wouldnt say in the real world if his hot sister told him to fuck her ;) @@@