All Comments on 'Pavlovian Response'

ohhhhhhhh dirty girl! supermarket shopping will never be the same again!

title. The first two lines set the stage, then it stops as she soaks! It is nailed??? home with that yucky BJ. It is all happening in fantasy, and many can relate to a similar desire by some beauty at a supermarket. I can't find anything I'd change.

of these little poems and submit them somewhere. I bet you get published, really. This is fascinating the way the image (of diapers of all things) creates this break where we go from a supermarket aisle to the poet's inner thoughts which are so not mundane! Just wonderful!

to come across a piece of work that is so effective in so few words. well done. :)

~ maria