All Comments on 'Run in with the Law'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Sexy...very sexy.

Glad you're back to writing, can't wait to see what you write next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
*****

Five.

cyberlarkcyberlarkabout 13 years ago
awesome

great job.... certainly put a smile on my face.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
DAMN!!!

This is hott and just sexy as heck. Keep it up... Loved It:>)

robgirl83robgirl83about 13 years ago
Super Hot

I read your other story so I kind of saw the ending but it was still super hot and sexy. So, glad you see you are writing again.

cherryontop1973cherryontop1973about 13 years ago
yeah it was hot as fire, dangit!

your writing was hella hot as always, and the momentum was a perfect escalation, de-escalation for a quickie... but i want you to finish jason's story (she pouted). seriously, this was very nice. well done!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

can we have more of these two.please! i will give the highest number.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 13 years ago
is it hot ih here?

yup.... Goin to take a very cold shower

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow

I thought this was so hot.. I have to take a cold shower.. please finish Jason story.. I fell in love iwth it..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yummy!

Whew...FI-YA!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot!!!!!

Really a hot story....but can you PLEASE finish the Jason's series? I need to know how they will end up.

creepyrjcreepyrjover 12 years ago

There is good and wow....this is WOW! Good stuff chica...now give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
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This story was fantastic! Soo hot, definitely a favorite of mine. But you need to learn the difference between a comma and a semicolon. That bothered me a lot :P

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
SH**!! I damn near broke a sweat!

This "quickie" was smokin' not! Your stories are great whether long to short! I hope you never stop giving us fans great chapters to read. As for the grammatical errors, I know there has to be some editors or english teachers within the membership roster that will be happy to help you out! Keep cranking out those Hottt!!! Stories! Meow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Surprise

OK that was good, didn't see the boyfriend playing cop cumming!

Redmoon_ElzRedmoon_Elzover 11 years ago
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

Where can I find a man like that!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
i cannot breathe

As soon as i catch my breath, i will be able to comment...

DixieBabeDixieBabealmost 11 years ago
My god....

.....my husband has NEVER played dirty cop like that.....I want one lol!!! Such a hotttt story, my god, I agree with the anon below...I can't breathe!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Wow! I had a feeling!

Loved it, loved it, loved it! I was feeling kind of bad for Grant but after I started to realized that Grant and the cop were the same person, I was completely taken away!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cool

Love it. Would like to do this with my man!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
darn

great story up until the end. i just hate it when the guy is someone the woman knows.

CeCeMonetCeCeMonetover 10 years ago
One good turn deserves another...

Thanks for the love Kitty! I'm glad I checked out your story too because it was well worth the read! So hot!!!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago

Damn, so good the second time around

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Got a little nervous..,

I liked that they knew each other. Awesome story!

Cindi47Cindi47almost 10 years ago

I had a feeling it might be Grant! good story.......

MimiRoseMimiRoseover 9 years ago
Awww

This is my favorite kind of story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
contrived

This wonderful piece would be so much better if there was some reason why she couldn't identify the officer ie too dark

sweetone66sweetone66over 9 years ago
VERY NICEEEEEEEEEEE...

Loved it, even before the surprise ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
My cop fantasy is complete!

Loved it!!!

GuyJDGuyJDalmost 9 years ago
Very Hot Story But....

It would have been greater had he been a real cop hired by her boyfriend to keep an eye on her.

AllyLarkAllyLarkover 8 years ago
perfect

Loved it!

I love role playing between real couples. They're realistic and relatable without them leaving me with an awkward guilt for enjoying and getting turned on by reluctance, non consensual, rough sex, possessive story line.

Plus gives me ideas for what I'll do when I get into my next relationship. Thanks for this eroticlitkitty.

birdymamabirdymamaover 7 years ago
Loved it

I loved the twist that it turned out to be Grant in the end. You are an pretty good writer

NanayaNanayaover 7 years ago
Lovely!

I love this! It's so fun!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

So so good!

ScentualEncountersScentualEncountersabout 6 years ago
Awesome surprise!

Love the ending! Pleasantly surprised and would love to read more about these two. Excellent work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Yum entrapment

So quick so goood

MzBeaMzBeaalmost 4 years ago
Hot

F the police lol..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Why ruin it?

That was soo hot until you realise it's just her bf, ruined the hot resistant sex theme

MickeyKayMickeyKayabout 3 years ago

Damn Kitty!!! You're on FIRE or is that just me!?! At first I was hopping it was Grant and then I just KNEW it was him! And don't listen to Anon saying revealing it was her man ruined it because it DIDN'T!!! I thought it was HOTTER!!! WHEW!!! And he sounds FINE AF!!! So does she though!!! I agree with other commenters Where Can I Find A Man Like This!?! I STRONGLY believe though that they're ONLY in peoples minds who then put them in a story line that's HOT AF!!! Thank you Kitty!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was really hot. Wow - their relationship is 🔥 🔥 🔥

4Klo_Black204Klo_Black20almost 2 years ago

Brush please come back to writing, please 😭 this is a 5 star all day

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