for opening up the comments. I already posted mine on the Bulletin Board.
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Anonymous02/13/11
I really like the start of this story. It's different from some of the other stuff on here and your writing is excellent. Lisa seems to have had some hard knocks in life (as well as made some poor choices) but she is facing this situation like an adult and that makes her a good heroine. And Justin will be good for her.
Can't read to read more!
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Anonymous05/17/11
Terrific story
I am amazed at how much this story sounded like my mom because she had gotten was pregnant with me when she was 15 and my dad left to go to el Salvador the minuet he found out. It's been 16 years and to this day I am happy he left because my step dad Henry is the best dad ever. So please keep writing. You work is terrific and you should make this story a series.
Thanks
for opening up the comments. I already posted mine on the Bulletin Board.
I really like the start of this story. It's different from some of the other stuff on here and your writing is excellent. Lisa seems to have had some hard knocks in life (as well as made some poor choices) but she is facing this situation like an adult and that makes her a good heroine. And Justin will be good for her.
Can't read to read more!
Terrific story
I am amazed at how much this story sounded like my mom because she had gotten was pregnant with me when she was 15 and my dad left to go to el Salvador the minuet he found out. It's been 16 years and to this day I am happy he left because my step dad Henry is the best dad ever. So please keep writing. You work is terrific and you should make this story a series.
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