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Build the Moon Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/08/11

More Pleaz

More how you just gone leave me hangin' like that, give me more!

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by lilliz02/08/11

nice beginning

Good beginning... would love to see more, please continue! :D

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by Anonymous02/08/11

more..

More more more

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by SunsilkWater02/09/11

Ooo~

You caught my attention from start to finish :3 I think this might be one of the shortest entries I enjoyed that had me guessing and picturing what would happen next. Great beginning :D

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by Anonymous02/09/11

Wow....

I usually don't comment, tho I read stories daily. Me and my girlfriend both love the story and can't wait for the next part. Good writing :)

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