Unwelcome Promotion

needs a sequel

like doing a hammer attack on the boss and throwing the wife down the stairs so they're both paralysed. Shit that is so wimpy

A SLUT AND A WIMPY MILKTOAST

but the money is better and he has new digs. TK U MLJ LV NV

WTF

was this? Too bad there isn't a "0" score. Are you trying to win over readers? Sure got a funny way to show it.

pull out the cell, take some snaps, tell her to find any other place to go, as a long term solution, and go to the president of the company with the snaps and the fate of mr. greene

That's It?

No way it ends like that.
Fuck the job.
Dump the whore.
Destroy the boss.

Fuck it.

traitor

his cornhole shagged, he smoked the meaty cock, betrayed!

wimp story

Cuck shiteatn story by a pussy wimp cuck

Junk!! Misterstan - why don´t you stop??

No human beeing would behave that way without earnestly thinking about committing suicide.
No plot and characters with the consistancy of thin air.
The whole story seems to me to be unbelievable rubbish, not worth while reading.

PICTURES...A LAW SUIT....DIVORCE...AND ADIOS

and try like hell to regain my self respect, TK U MLJ LV NV

Waste of paper

The story is a piece of crap do u really think anyone that was piss to work there like that and ready to quit would have stood by and let that shit happen and then especially after hearing that last part just walk out. The only thing I can think of is that this is a true story that happened to u And u were the one to just walk out

What a load of rubbish!!! Unfinished rubbish at that!

Misterstan my ass

missy stan is more like it what a fucking wimp assed sissy

Yuck !!!!

This is a total crap story.

Pathetic attempt at cuckold fantasy

Even a willing cuckold would wince at this one.

Fuck you you piece of shit!!!

You are no man you are a piece of shit!!! STOP WRITING THIS WIORTHLESS DRIVEL YOU PILE OF SHIT!!!

Even for fictional/fantasy submission....

this story sucked. So unbelievable that it was laughable. Total pile of trash.

Well that was just ugly

But I can see the light at the end of the tunnel for the husband. Get videos of the wife having sex with the boss and maybe some co-workers. Divorce the slut, sue the boss and retire. It's a slam dunk and the only possible ending that would make this sorry story worth reading.

Needs a 2nd ch

Until that day Bob was an unknowing cuckold. A 2nd ch should reveal whether he'll resolve to be a knowing and widely known cuckold for a meager raise and a horn-adorned promotion or whether he'll resolve his lot in a different manner.

Misterstan, I encourage you to flesh this tale out to some sort of conclusion. 5*

Missed Opportunity

As they finished their one hour sex session, that would have been the time to quietly walk the rest of the way in (they're still naked) and calmly tell Mr. Green that he is tendering his resignation and intends to see an attorney for Greens conduct with his wife.

His wife, clever bitch, she knew at the dinner that hubby was irritated with Green and wasn't too sure or keen on an intervention with him (Job Security?).. Also, after Green left Kelly quickly threw the typical woman's ploy at him - well, you didn't do anything about his conduct and he's easy to handle anyway - talk about a clever wife - she had fun and hubby didn't even catch it, she knew he was in a difficult spot with Green playing with her and any good woman (including Kelly) knew it was her place to help Green maintain his poise and dignity but also to back off! Green later stated - He knew he was going to fuck her...of course, she knew it too!

So Stan, an interesting fantasy story but you billed Bob as a man who really was not a wuss and didn't share his wife so now ... 'What the Heck!

OH...Definitely needs a second chapter - for all of us to see what you are going to do and - for your redemption as a potential good and interesting writer!!!

Thanks.

Cell Phone

In reality, out comes Bob's cell phone, with which he video tapes the whole thing, followed by a law suit, which would be settled to Bob's advantage for millions, resulting in Bob's boss getting fired...and little wifey getting turfed out on her worthless ass!!

The story is not a masterpiece of erotic literature but is not nearly as bad as some comments suggesf

It is like a jerk-off fantasy. if your thing is to see your wife fucked by another man, in your fantasy world you can be in the same room & not be seen. it's like in a dream: when there is no way out of a situation, all of a sudden you are at a sea side resort and people sworming you are not gang members but beach vendors and the expensive watch you lost is back on your wrist.
the scene where the wife fucks her husband's boss is erotic, gave me a hard-on, so did the scene where the boss groped the wife at the dinner party.
The rest of the plot is not logical.
respectfully, the story is more of a porn video then a good erotic movie.

I slept with the boss of my husband's boss

It was 5 years ago when i was 39, He was 52, very handsome, very much a gentleman, well read, very nice, respected everybody, self confident. I fell for him. He was good in bed.
What happened is he & I volunteered for the same charity. We kept meeting at events, got to know each other... We had sex about 12 times.
I know i must have help my husband on way or another. However whatever happened between me & the boss of his boss, i was not in it for money or financial gain.

re: I slept with the boss of my husband's boss

yeah we know, your just the typical slut. Your the reason aids exist and in the end you'll be a simple minded whore with a worn out cunt.

RE I SLEPT WITH THE BOSS OF MY HUSBAND'S BOSS

Good for you, girl. I am happy for you. I AM SUPPORTIVE!
I am married too, & I swear I love my husband and would never leave him.
Years ago I worked for a huge grocery store which was always understaffed and never ever put us on overtime. Yet while i worked in the night shift, a repairman worked there in the same few week. He was nice, friendly, very polite & sexy. He & i connected (& then some) & yes we had a fling. I realized that having sex with a lover is DIFFERENT than having sex with your husband. It's good for a woman to try another man every few years. I myself had 4 flings & have been happily married for 20 years. Of late, younger men are into me. I hope i will be self-confident enough to...
I know i am not the only wife in this world who loves her husband but is ready to break the rules to get more out of life.

Sicko

Yet another wimp.

A whore is a whore whether she or her husband get the income

personally would film them, then sue the company, get the bosses job, and divorce the slut

Agree with Rehnquist

One of the elite writers on this site (Rehnquist) nailed the problem with this 'account.' IMHO, Loving Wives isn't telling about Hubby's Sweetie getting nailed by his boss. It IS about the adjustments the couple (individually and jointly) make in their marital relationship. SO ... this 'account' is only the set-up for an LW story. Otherwise, post it in Erotic Coupling (clearly not Romance!)

Too many people shit talked the story: it is not a 5-star fiction but it can be a handy jack-off material

Perhaps the author should have submitted in Voyeur category.

So NOT a loving wife?

But a whore that has pimped herself out so hubby can make more money? Why didn't he use his I-phone and make a little video? Better yet, simply go out and bring in Mr. Green's secretary? That way he has a witness. Now he can sue the Company (It's a large Company right?) for sexual harrassment and other violations. He'll get several things. One, he gets a slam dunk divorce. Two, he gets Mr Green fired. Three, if Mr Green is married he gets Mrs. Green a divorce. Four, he will either get a nice promotion and a raise or he'll get a huge payoff and an excellent letter of reference. In any case, he'll have a lot more money and no cheating slut for a wife. But the way you ended this was just bullshit. In fact, it was no ending at all. No stars for absolute drivel.

For Heaven's sake guys, it's JUST a story. (☆☆☆☆)

The scene when Mr Green is the couples dinner guest is very erotic.
In its last part, the story lost a lot in terms of quality, but some readers like it that way.
The story is short & one can jerk off to it.

People gang up on loving wife stories with a vengeance. This particularly goes for stories where the husband tolerates his wife's infidelity. Literotica stories are EROTIC FICTION. The characters in them are no more real than X-men or Captain America.

☆☆☆☆+ (4+) Erotic!

Many readers do not understand that some men a born with propensity to develop voyeur side (may be it is latent, hiden, until an event wakes it up!)

A load by any other name.

This story is a load of filthy, stinking SHIT!

The story is a fantasy; the author does not even want us to believe it is the truth

The morale of the story is NOT TO MAKE ANY DEALS WITH THE DEVIL, phylosophically speaking.

The story is not without erotic qualities! I maintain that a scenario where the boss fucks his subordinate's wife can be very erotic in literary fiction (in real life too IF you are kinky!)

Hot story, until.....

Your last paragraph ruined the entire story. It's one thing for her to screw the boss to get hubby promoted, but for her to allow herself to be whored out by the boss to hubby's coworkers is just too over the top.

Green needs to die

enough said

I REALLY LIKED THE STORY & GAVE IT A 4+ (IN SCHOOL IT WOULD BE A B+); THE STORY WAS WRITTEN FOR PEOPLE WHO ARE INTO BOSS-FUCKS-WIFE EROTIC FICTION

The story is EROTIC.
It is very erotic from the moment Mr Green hugs Kelly, pulls her to sit next to him, places his hand onto her thigh, switches to his good mood, & focuses his attention to Kelly.

Next scene is very telling and laden with understated eroticism; it is also really realistic. Mr Green squeezed Kelly's ass just begore he left ! We learn at that point that Kelly is in a good mood, quite cheerful and that Bob is indecisive, wishy-woshy.

Each following paragraph prepare us for more action & builds the right dynamic between characters.

MrStan managed to tell us a lot on less than a single page! He (she) followed so-called Chekhov's gun priciple, whereby the writer should avoid all details that have no relevance to the story line. ("The writer should NOT mention the gun unless someone is going to use it later on".)

For most end-users this story has the same purpose as a 12-minute porn video wherein an unscrupulous and authoritarian boss fucks his subordinate's wife.

We should not judge Kelly because "a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do." Both she and Bob are discovering their respective kinky sides, which can be inferred from the context.

4 stars (4.2/5.0 = 84%) LIKE IT! THE STORY IS EROTIC (IN A KINKY WAY)

In my opinion misterstan is a good writer of erotic fiction.

The husband's character is 'Dr Faustus 2.0' (he kind of makes a deal with the devil).

Story tags are incomplete & can be misleading. You should have added these tags: cuckold, husband watches, authoritarian.

@ last comment ( respectfully )

I agree with you about this author . Unfortunately in terms of Literotica venure, he pulled his very best stories and went to Amazon. There's a couple quality efforts still left and I'm grateful for that. But I gotta get a Kindle and shell out some lucre because he skimmed the cream here and transposed it over ( as is his right ...even his duty to his wonderful, warped talent)