Unwelcome Promotion

Yawn

Hope you didn't lose any mental capacity composing this sorry wimp hubby, spontaneously evil wife heap of shit. Your bluecross may not cover self-inflicted abuse.

Time to quit

The wife and the company must be dumped.

MrStan..you are a sad loser

What crap. Likely is an indication of a deranged mind.

shit

go to a doctor you need help.

1 star

Is there a shrink on this site? This writer and a few others need to talk to someone about their warped brains.

Bullshit.

Any normal man would have walked in and told his wife she was history.
He would have called the secretary in for a witness and told his boss he was sueing the company.

Pull your head out of your ass.

5 Stars

MrStan, I loved it.

Jack Green

you write

you write for one reason to piss people off, you consider the readers losers but your the loser so piss off.

This isn't a story . . .

It's a snapshot. You've got the beginning: Wife being ogled and groped by the boss at work. You've got the middle: Wife getting banged in exchange for hubby getting a raise and a promotion. The end? He just leaves? He accepts the promotion and the whoring out of his wife?

Think about it. He didn't confront either the boss or the wife. He didn't leave her. He didn't accept it. He watched his marriage die before his eyes--and his reaction to the scene tells us he wasn't happy about it--but then you don't explore any of his ultimate reactions. Not a goddamned one of them. Nothing.

Thus, it isn't a story. You could've just written it like this:

I was pissed off because I couldn't get a raise or promotion. My boss came to dinner and felt up my wife, ignoring me the whole time. My wife was pissed about this and about me letting it happen, but for whatever completely unexplained reason she went to my boss and agreed to be his personal whore for one hour a week in exchange for me getting a raise and a promotion. I found out when I walked in on them and watched him jackhammer her with his incredibly huge cock. She gave him her ass, which amazingly didn't hurt at all though she was a virgin there. I left. The end.

See, you've set up the story, but that's all. You've created the situation, but then failed to explore the ramifications of the situation you explored.

are all the writers on this site sissyboys

watch other men fuck their wives and do nothing about it.sissyboy site.

Wait, I get it now... You are the president of the Matt Morreau fan club.

A willing wimp cuckold who allows his boss to fuck his wife for a promotion. I think I read this earlier today.

So he just watched her get screwed by his boss for an hour? I try to avoid calling the men "wimps" but this guy needs to be smacked. His marriage is ruined so he shoudl have said screw the job and help on to some self-respect.

Don't take it so hard. The other posters write with such indignation that you wonder if this didn't really happen to them. Maybe they should move on to Incest stories, you know, something that's a little more healthy.

Hopefully

Hopefully, he watched to see and hear everything he would need to know. He already was disappointed in her conduct with the boss at their dinner, suspect about her dress behavior at his office and now...

...are you going to wimp him out? You indicated he was leaving. With the boss' last comment to Kelly about fucking some of his co-workers it would be different and refreshing to see an author (YOU') turn him around and walk in.

Now they will have their mouths agape in horror and surprise. Just once, have him not beat her but pick her up and hurl her at the boss. Have him take out his phone, get a picture, tell the slut she doesn't have a home, he quits and heads to a lawyers office, calls a locksmith and heads home for a stiff drink!

I know its' a story but - just once - let the guy be a man and the disrespecting wife - toss her...just ONCE'

Do The Math

Did Bob really get a promotion or did his wife just join the work force as the company whore?

She was the company whore. She was a whore all the time

But wimp cuke hubby doesn't do anything abouit it.I think MATTEI Moreau wrote it. SOB hubby could have owned the company

Crap

Just plain crap

Agree with Rehnquist

Here we have a husband who is mad enough about his boss being a touchy slob with his wife that he is about to quit his job. He is angry! Yet faced with his wife being screwed and his boss talking trash about him he just sits and watches and is just going to sneak out of the office afterward. You are describing two different people. An already angry man confronted with additional provocation is not going to sit quietly and watch. He is going to explode. You obviously are trying to write Matt Moreau pathetic male characters but you need to work on it a bit more. He needs to swallow his pride better and smile after eating his shit sandwich.

Pathetic!!!

Pathetic!!!

Kelly

Kelly and Green would both die a slow and horrible death. Start with genital mutilation and then a lot of facial surgery. A sharp blade and she would be bound and watch me carve him up knowing her turn was coming.

Infantile!

Among the worst writers on Lit.com.

w.t.f.

This is one of the most pathetic pieces of crap ever, & that's the best thing I could say about this.

Mr. Rehnquist...ahhhemmmm

Mr. R, your own submissions are quite decent but you have given the author of this piece a fair critique of his word and showed him how to make it better. Unfortunately, you made the assumption that he wanted it to BE better. I don't think that is an accurate assumption.

I am convinced that most writers in the LW category do not want to write well. They write to a) get rid of their own demons b)gain some kind of twisted acceptance c) be able to tell friends they were published d) just piss people off.

Otherwise, why do they continue to write drivel which no one likes?

I agree that if the points you made were considered and applied, this would be a much better story. But, clearly, writing a good story or even a coherent one was not the reason behind this.

Besides, it is hard to remember all those pesky things when you type one handed. :)

C

sick male humiliation and disrespect

writer you have now told us what you want to spend your time on and what type of person you are. Fetish sicko seeking male humiliation.

Go away sicko.

Rehnquist is wrong

This was a good story. The fact it has no 'end' is in itself erotic. It's left ambiguous, and that uncertainty about how hubby is going to take this inspires the imagination, which is the fountain of the erotic. It's looking likely that he's already imagining himself sat in exactly those humiliating meetings his boss has been talking about, almost still able to smell his own wife's sex emanating from the fibres of the carpet.
People who don't like stories about cuckolded men shouldn't read the 'Loving Wives' category, as this goes with the territory.
I particularly like the stories where the wife ends up getting impregnated by her lover, rather than her own husband.

JPB

You learned to write at the knee of JPB. Good wrting but flawed. IN particular flawed by being unresolved. YOu developed a conflict that screAms: complete me, let me finish, OMG! I need an ending regardless how it comes out. This is not a "use" your own imagination story ala JPB, but a developed plot that quits. Do not be a quitter. Find the finish.

re-Anon Rehnquist is wrong

Are you saying Anon that you would be tickled pink to have your wife knocked up by another man, so you can raise his bastard. Is that what you're saying?

Are you Matt morreau? Cause this reads just like his wimp crap

Instead of indulging your fucked up fantasies writting crap like this, please find a therapy group. Also please please do not have kids. Your genes will only weaken the human race and your ideas will screw the kids beyond repair. Honestly, you are very very in need of professional therapy.

Is life really that difficult for you pathetic losers?

seriously, this site attracts all the self loathing, sexually frustrated losers, who so babdly want to suck a dick but have never dared to... and hate women. Why? Are you that ugly? that fat? that stupid? you can't try to enjoy your own life? This crap posting does not have a single erotic aspect to it... once again it is a story about humiliation and pain. In what world do you like to think that getting off on humiliation and pain is normal? If I posted a story here about taking my loving wive's pet poodle, putting it in the microwave, then pulling it out just before it exploads and fucking it... is that acceptable to you? Is that a loving wife story because I mentioned her? Or are you smart enough to realize that it is just as sad and pathetic and emotionally disturbed as the story you posted?

Seriously Mrstan... get a life!

Bad Day!!

For Loving Wife site a lot of crap old and new.

Ooo la la

Great story - more please in this series?

Right, Innocent wife

Innocent, yeah right, and I have a mountaintop Ski resort in Florida for sale. She has been cheating for years. Nobody just sells out like that with out already doing it.
So quit, while stealing all the insider info you can to send to the competitors, and move on. Don't say goodbye, don't ask why, just move on. Oh and empty all the accounts and leave her broke. How Bob could not see Green as an ass bag, not know of other wives he has fuck I don't know because this would not have been the first.
So Kelly was a slut. She is now a litteral whore, fucking for money.
Green was an abusive ass whole, and well still is.
Bob was blind, deaf and ignorant. He is not so blind or deaf now, but don't know if the brain has started to work yet.

Story was OK, felt jerky and rough (no pun intended).

eagle14 is correct

p.s. the why this is shaping up eagle14 has the true ending.
eagle14 good writing, sort brief and to the point.

You know what is the best thing about cucky stories like this?

If they all wimp out like your character, you are doing the world a favor.

Your boy will remove his DNA from the gene pool. No woman, whether a whore or virtuous, would consider such a spineless drip worthy of impregnating her.

That's better for the rest of the world. no more wimpy cucks.

Excellent Sexy Wife!

Excellent Hot Wife story, I loved it! Keep writing, your wife sounds sooooooooooooo sexy! I love how she fucked your boss and his big cock, she really did it because she loves you so much! You got to watch too, that's awesome! I hope for part 2, 3, etc..loved it! With a body and looks like hers it's good for her to have a Big Cocked lover along with you, her average cocked husband, too. Keep up the Great cuck stories friend! Good Job!

A poor attempt to mimic JPB or MM?

This story was not written half as well as a JPB or a MM story. The only thing it did as well as stories by those authors was to create a superb wimp who not only lacks balls, he lacks a dick. I must agree with Rehnquist and others that this was not a complete story -- Dickless basically does nothing except observe, then walks out. The story also lacked eroticism. Just describing the wife bent over and being rammed by a big dick fails to provide even an ounce of eroticism. Uno starro, and that's generous.

RE:Sexy wife.

Are you for real? of course you are sickos like you do exsist. Thats why the world as we know it is doomed.

Look at all the hate mail...

Many of the most popular stories on this site feature incest fantasies. Some feature rape fantasies. However, when a writer comes along who writes cuckold stories everyone jumps on his back as being a sicko and how unhealthy it is. I'll agree that if you live like this in real life, you're a sicko. That goes for most the stories on literotica. I don't see why Misterstan is getting all the hate. -B

Too bad he was such a wimp

And too bad she was such a slut. The story didn't seem to be very real, although it was well written, it just didn't seem believable.

Perhaps neither of the characters were worth feeling anything towards them, if there were more of a character building then the husband's character may have had some sympathy.

Dude grow some balls

At least give the men in your story some virtual balls

Permission please?

I'd love to write a follow-up to this story! May I?

Go ahead

Scorpio44:

Sure, knock yourself out.

This sucks `

just like all the other balless wimp authors like to write!

Dude, I loved it

It had just the right amount of everything. I dig the wife being in over her head and not being Insta-Slut. I wouldn't mind if you wrote a sequel yourself, but I guess I'll wait for Scorpio's.

needs more

i liked the story over all but the big question is what does he do next with that unanswered it's like a good movie with no ending, so hope to see more soon.

forced to fuck the boss's friends

this was great I would love to read about his boss making her take on his friends & end up having them do all kinds of kinky things to her

Quit the wife and the job, and ASAP.

Powerful older boss, need more!

Made me so hot.

hmmmm...very nice

I love the coercion and the eventual giving in to get what she wants from the arrangement. I suspect many loving husbands would trade a crack at their wives for that elusive raise and promotion.

Stupid boss

An employer who gets that kind of bonus, and then wants to undercut his productivity by denigrating his newly promoted subordinate. Stupid man.