My Submissive Valentine

Nicely done, a sexy little story

Good job

Really like it!

Delicious

Thank you

Great!

Anticipation and imagination are often better than endless description.

Love it

I'm already a little turned on. I really hope you continue this story. I would love to see the rest of the night played out.

very good

Please continue the story. It's only there first date, and I'm intrigued.

feedback

you write really well... it flows easily... like a good film script which leaves a lot for the director, your story leaves a lot for the reader... it is erotic because it is all about imagination and desire, not polluted by tawdry details of reality ...

Ambermine is right.

It doesn't need a follow up. As it is it's tremendously arousing. The whole point of the story has been made without reducing it to tripe.
Three thumbs up.