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The Big Day

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by Anonymous

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by Eric_Shift02/09/11

Love if you continued this

May be the start of a beautiful friendship.
But don't have her marry the Tool she was going to.
Explore the new dynamic between these two, with no cuckolding getting in the way.

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by Mr_Exposition02/09/11

Category Confusion

This seemed like a far better fit for nonconsent/reluctance than BDSM. Good story though, just would've preferred a better warning of what I was reading.

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by Anonymous02/10/11

Bad grammar ruins a good story

Needs some grammatical edits, and maybe switch to a different category.

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