All Comments on 'First Date'

by darkdaylady

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Scotsman69Scotsman69about 13 years ago
So delicate, so spare

Almost perfect, a few spelling mistakes apart.

You got 5. Thank you for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Love this, just wish you'd added in the spanking.

estragonestragonabout 13 years ago
Good Stuff

Hot and kinky.

cyberlarkcyberlarkabout 13 years ago

positively delicious.

thischickthischickabout 13 years ago

I read this with my mouth open. What a great idea. Making this a favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Yup!

For a first date that was Fantastic <3

marzipanmousemarzipanmouseover 11 years ago
More!

I mean, um.. more please, ma'am? That was fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
holy moly

If THAT was a first date, where do they go from here? I could not be so brave. Glad to see her set such an important limit at the start. Laughed at the manager coming to check on them. Must have been an interesting kitchen conversation.

Blackrabbit711Blackrabbit711almost 10 years ago
First Date

Great read and very hot, loved the intensity. Hope there is more to come.

I have a story with the same title!! Hope you check it out as there is also a restaurant scene!!

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