All Comments on 'Happy Father's Day'

ALI, YOU ARE A GREAT TEASE AND THAT MAKES YOUR STORIES SPECIAL. AND YOU ARE A TALENTED WRITER ALSO.

AS FAR AS THE OTHER COMMENTER IS CONCERNED THEY DIDN`T HAVE TO READ THE STORY OR EVEN B IN LITEROTICA TO BEGIN. I HOPE IT DID NOT DISCOURAGE YOU.AND, AS YOU WILL SEE, I DO NOT HIDE BEHIND THE GOOD OLD ANONYMOUS TITLE

KEEP YOUR STORIES CUMMING

What a wonderful, loving daughter, to think of the perfect Father's Day gift. It was beautiful to watch them find their very special love.

loved your story and being a dad of 3 daus makes it even hottier tho i have never done anything with them it has still been a deep fanasty of fine mm thanks would lvoe to read more of your and love to chat more you can email at duebee42@aol.com

wish I had a daughter like you

Too rushed, but fairly good.

Were you in that big of a hurry to get your daddys swet cock inside your hot young pussy, now I am sure that you had a good time in his bed with him making you a woman, but you should have shared some of the more intricate details of how you two made it so wonderful as a father and daughter love.

That story was way to short and seemed pretty unrealistic. Now maybe if there was some sort of story to this before hand it might make it seem a bit more realistic.

I loved this story. It's sweet and simple and effective.

what better gift for a daughter to give her daddy on fathers day than to give him your virginity.

I know it can happen like this, my daughter gave me hers on fathers day, there had been no teasing or such before hand, she was on a weekend visit with me ~(divorced from her mother) Friday and Saturday were a normal day of shopping and a nice meal Saturday night, then I woke with her naked in my bed Sunday morning.

Very cute and simple I love it! I love the cuteness of a Father's Day present specifically so I enjoyed this a ton!!

it was short and to the point, no show of feeling before hand and Sunday morning climbing into bed with him, this was how my daughter and I first had sex, she had to be quick as her mother was down stairs so no lingering after the dead was done, but plenty of time in the weeks and months that followed.