All Comments on 'Grab, Pull and Thrust'

Admirable prose that conveys the torrid heat of an exceptional encounter... Congratulations! I shall now explore your other posts — hoping that there are more, indeed. It is a rare occurrence to witness such elegant and potent writing.

Well written, as always, except I cannot understand the anatomical description of "he held my hands and then wrapped his arms around my body as by breasts scraped his chest." What did he do: grab her left hand in his right hand, and vice versa, and then swing his arms over her head? Otherwise your description does not make sense. That being said, good description and more "fantasy" than "erotic coupling."

So that description was a little off. It was meant to convey that he held her arms and pinned them behind her back as he wrapped his arms around her, seemed so clear when I wrote it. Sorry for the confusion, :) .

I'm just glad you're reading.

BethyBoo