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by Anonymous

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by desperate102/11/11

Appreciatin

Your way with words makes the stories you tell jump out of the page and seem sooooo real. Im sure that many guys have had similar experiences and relate to these positively

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by Anonymous02/11/11

Great start

Great start. Can't wait for more

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by Anonymous02/11/11

Good start,

Roll on chapter twq.

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by Anonymous02/12/11

Okay......

....left it a bit wide open there sport...don't be a tease....do finish the story.

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by tturtle5002/12/11

Pictures

I can take pictures also!! Good story!!

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by Anonymous10/28/15

exciting

fucking brilliant story telling

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