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Your mythology is better than mine.
A fine addition to you series.
'civilisation began in Sumer'
:)
nice job taking us back through time, friday, and worth a little dig to find the bones to this. especially being a Capricorn - how could i not go looking? i have a charm of the half-goat half-fish on a chain. and now i know more about its origins!
liked these lines lots:
of making--
and of mischief when
cooking Men from clay
was all the rage amongst Gods.
a flood to float his thoughts on
Babel is gone, Sumer no more,
Eridu smitten with weapons.
The sky has moved
one query: should there read a comma after 'water' in this line?
There was so much water Enki thought
WTF
never thought I'd love the zodiac so much. You really know how to bring the star clutter down to earth.
Yeah A real 5
This line
Half goat, half fish—what the fuck?
Caprice? No. It's Enki,
Lord of Nudimmud—of making--
and of mischief when
cooking Men from clay
was all the rage amongst Gods.
is so frickin cool. I mean pee in panties cool.
!
En-Hedu-Ana would appreciate you ,as do I!
Another really good poem in this series.
Poet Guy's one quibble would be with the WTF, which seems out of place in an otherwise elegant poem. The line "a flood to float his thoughts on" is superb.
PEOPLE WITH VISION
of past and futures are never suprised TK U MLJ LV NV
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