My Crotch Sniffing Dog

You are really sick.

Where did you ever get the idea you could write an erotic tale?

Train Your Dog

to write a better story.

Sick fuck

What kind of a sick fuck would write such a sick story?

jail

nuff said

Black humour

This is very funny..black humour

terrific!

This story is terrific!

God people calm down,its a fucking story.And guess what you dipshits its listed under 'non consent',if you think rape is sick why read stories about it.

Right

Always forgetting about the existence of DNA

Real Doggystyle

Haha , funny erotic story . I feel sorry for the dog however . He's the one doing all the hard work . Sniffing the girl's pussy to see if their ready to be bred and conceive . Perhaps you could have rewarded the dog for his efforts by forcing the women to let the dog mount and breed them ? There possibly could be a few litter of puppies running around ! lol

Poorly written misogynistic shit about a crotch sniffing dog and rapist--pathetic.

What did you expect

Its in the non-consent catagory, if you don't like, don't read.

very funny ending

HA

Good story with a lot of potential

A very good stroy with quite a positive ending, however more background information and indepth details would have really made this story one to remember. Please notify when a new story comes out.

Rapists must DIE

ANONYMOUS