I liked the story very much. Very good sense of humour how tables are turned ... However, you might rather sign stories that are each other's sequels as multi-chapter. I read "once bitten twice shy" first ... and half of the fun as well as that story's understanding was spoilt.
But that's only a blame of the way of how it was edited, I don't have the least objections against either of both stories. They are both extremely intelligent and ironic about the hypnotisizing stuff.
There is no third chapter of Jane and Darla's adventures, is there?
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I liked the story very much. Very good sense of humour how tables are turned ... However, you might rather sign stories that are each other's sequels as multi-chapter. I read "once bitten twice shy" first ... and half of the fun as well as that story's understanding was spoilt.
But that's only a blame of the way of how it was edited, I don't have the least objections against either of both stories. They are both extremely intelligent and ironic about the hypnotisizing stuff.
There is no third chapter of Jane and Darla's adventures, is there?
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