All Comments on 'How Ironic Ch. 01'

It's good keep going! I like the flow of the story. Seems mildly rat-pack like in the characterization of the girl.

Great read. Good foundation for a string series. Please write more

Great start.Keep it up

Reminescent of the movie 'Some kind of wonderful' but you've added your own flourishes to make the story your own. Please keep up the good work. It made me very hot and wanting more. Nice cliff hanger ending.

Kisses, Chiara

Fucking Hot! Keep it up, and keep me up!

boy and girl fall for each other only to find out thier parents are getting married done a million times already try to think of something new please

DBRS

I think this will be a great story keep up the good work cant wait to read more

hope you keep it up. some people try to knock anything do't let them change you or your story.

DISCLAIMER - This submission does not include any incest.

Honestly, I don't know why the submission category was changed. Originally I was going to have it under Erotic Couplings... And the webmaster changed it to Incest/Taboo. Maybe this was because of my tags, but I do not intend to make this chain of stories about incest. So, if you wanted incest, I'm sorry: you won't find it here.

- L.

Only four stars because no action....but it's coming. Obvious that dad is marrying the boy's mom and the possibilities are delicious....lets see the next chapter.

I like the way u started off this story it's a build up to what comes next.Yeah it started off not being incest but then after getting to the end I see where your going with it .I like it keep it up.

I only noticed one possible correction, so you are doing fine so far, H.A.L.

I'm eager to see how this develops.

I look forward to the continuation.

i wish all writers and readers would start complaining to the stupid web masters about thier constant screwups this should not be in this area as the writer said. you really need to file one hell of a complaint about this screwup. keep writing and keep complaining if they screwup again or if you see one of thier screwups on another story

I wish you wold continue. I can see where this is headed and I like the story. Great job.

I was just getting into it when it ended....how sad!! Please, continue, this is a pretty good plot line!

Good start forlittle miss i dont know anything to ill do anything sounds like her soon to be stepbrother already knew about her