All Comments on 'My First Anal Sex'

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estragonestragonabout 13 years ago

"She is a lot like me in different ways." Don't you mean in several ways, or in some ways? Likewise you may have a taut asshole, but you cannot have a "taunt" asshole (although I recommend that you taunt every asshole you meet). I think that you meant a "thick guttural growl"; your husband may have gained an inch or two at the waist, but is he really "thick gutted"? Poor chap if he is, but everything came out all right in the end (pun definitely intended).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
How old are you?

"One of the things I want to experience the most is anal sex. Haha, I've just admitted to myself that I want anal sex."

Sorry but your writing doesn't seem very mature.

BarbaraBarbaraabout 13 years ago
Agreeing with other critics, suggest writing with an inflatable dildo firmly inserted, for added authenticity!

Sadly lacking in both maturity and anal receptiveness, uninformative Bios add nothing to convince literotica readers to vote in large numbers, even if deserved? At writer's current rate of unforced errors, pro Tennis match ups can't be recommended either. even with wheelchair-bound opponents. Work on your bio remembering that; to verbalise erotic action requires further practical experiences, in either giving or receiving anally pleasurable attention.

subwrytersubwryterabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thank

I would like to thank all for the helpful comments. I'm sorry if the story comes of immature or even at times uninformed. I will be working on that in the future as well as my bio.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
It should only be so easy.

More than a bath, hon; if you are going to do the dirty deed.

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