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An American haiku, did you see that?
mirror
in the Kigo? position (did I get that right?)
and
image
I win, I win
Even the great Kaishaku (who comes closest to Japanese in English) listens when I say it can't be an American haiku unless it has a mirror in it.
100!
but this is a serious haiku.
reflecting
I am reflecting...
silent as glass moment
...lips smile
(-.-)thumbs up!
*****
Five.
The mirror reflects without reflection.
Interesting and thought provoking.
Excellent
Every line is open to interpretation and that adds to the overall hall of mirrors effect of the poem. It's a pleasure to read you again.
pretty
and cutting
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Wish I could say so much in so few words
It can hurt so deeply!
Kaishaku has put into a very few words how many of us feel.
A just a straight poem, magic!
As a haiku, close but no banana.
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rewrite the book, VR. The new haiku by Kaishaku
5
I see bad anonymous bombed your score to. I gave you poem a five, where are the haters when anonymous gives a GOOD score? whinging in the forum instead of writing
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