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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone02/11/11

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not
fast
enuff
comment was on the ice; 100!

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by PoetGuy02/11/11

Quite lovely

and quite funny, as well. Poet Guy assumes, then, that this is not haiku. Or can haiku be funny? In any case, well done.

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by Angeline02/11/11

Lovely

And I really like how "spring" works as both noun and verb.

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo02/12/11

teeheehee

has nice words that i like, and it is kewl, not cold, but kewl.

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by vrosej1002/14/11

Fricken dissapearing comments!

This one is an excellent haiku. Bravo. Most try here, few succeed. You did.

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