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by Angeline02/11/11

Loads of interesting wordplay

some works better than others and overall the effects overshadow the narrative--it sort of gets lost to me in all the metaphor and trick the eye technique. Still it's fluid and you write well. I'll be looking to reading more from you.

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by vrosej1002/12/11

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I got lost in this one too but it is very well written and good intentions sometimes get lost in the mix. I have enjoyed you work previously and will continue to do so I feel.

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by Esperanza_Hidalgo02/12/11

Good ear poem

but still not sure of meaning, so maybe you can explain it on the poetry form so wittle me understands. You have a poet's voice, the challenge is retaining voice and writing a poem that more than you understand. Nonetheless, I liked it as ear candy.

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