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PLUR Psalms 01: Annunciation

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by Anonymous

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by Koba02/12/11

I liked this poem! Good use of sound, very good beat! Good work!

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by GuiltyPleasure02/12/11

Interesting

It held me to the end. The better, imo, of your two PSALMS but both are unusual and intriguing.

Tess

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by Angeline02/12/11

Another great read!

Though I think I preferred the other psalm over this which seems a little wordy to me: not much, but maybe you could do some judicious pruning and have a stronger piece. But I say that in the context of this being (imo) a really good poem to begin with.

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by fridayam02/13/11

I loved

the ritualistic language and the liturical atmosphere. Good read.

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