All Comments on 'From Teacher to Mistress of Dungeon'

by xperia2995

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Great Story

You have written my darkest fantasy, one that I can only dream of exploring

steve7766steve7766about 13 years ago
awesome

excelent piece of work. would love it to be real 4 me.

jbilovejbiloveabout 13 years ago
Yes, Mistress

Mistress, as an experienced bisexual male submissive slave/slut, I love the flavor of this story.

Please continue it on if you would be so kind.

Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice debut!

I only wish your first story had been longer! You obviously are capable of more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
very good story

Just reread it before you post it I saw many mistakes in it but loved the story. I am a true slave to mistress In columbus Ohio

xperia2995xperia2995about 13 years agoAuthor
thanks everyone!

glad you all like my first story,

Sorry for making the story so short and full of mistakes, i was just in a hurry to post it, i'll be coming back stronger next time :)

Mistress_Fire30Mistress_Fire30almost 13 years ago
A few mistakes but enjoyable

Though I did find several mistakes, I enjoyed the story. I will one day have a dungeon like this one. For now, improv is My best friend. lol I hope to see more soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
are you kidding.....?

i tend to forget....most of the writers here are not real life subs or dom/es....oh well, practice makes perfect....errr....i should say, PERFECT practice makes perfect..keep writing though, never can tell...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
shit

Almost made me cum reading it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story hope there’s more coming

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