All Comments on 'The Failure of One Night Standing'

can I steal the first line? I'll change the gender.

This is good, very good. 100!

And I won't even steal the line. :D

Really good. Really, really.

Very good, love it..BZ

M

change the gender...teeheehee, also, no evaporation--u can't have sex with an apparition. I always get your poetry--me thinks some commonality of spirit exists. Do you think perhaps we have a linkage somewhere in the dawning aboriginal gene pool?

.....simple and simply wonderful!

Tess+5

ripples like its own mirage

Perfect, simple, lyrical and poetical excellence. I loved it. Thank you!

Five.

and divine x

just love this.

Such economical, clever storytelling.