All Comments on 'Groyne'

ouh, oh

so what now?

100 well deserved, more multiple directions of the sense of the words.

.......say I loved this. An ode to those seaside sentinals we all but ignore.

"grey descent

silent into lapping

ripples on possible glass" - evokes wide skies and calm seas.

Tess

The careful and understated assonance makes the whole poem sound like a insistent whisper or maybe a breeze. "ripples on possible glass" is just wonderful. You've given nature a voice that speaks louder than the words in this piece which is, imo, quite an achievement.

to read such a smooth sound. Curious, you are now posting again after a long hiatus. Please continue. I learn from reading and need forms like this, so, do it for espie--purty pelase. Now I must look up assonance cuz

espie don't know.

feeling remarkably soothed

beautiful!

Very smooth, and soft to the ears, I caught the feel of the sea in this one...well done

M