All Comments on 'Wadded Red Lace'

the big why; w/o comment 100 though

......do I have to go and read that story? No, its enough to get the atmosphere just from these brief lines. Nicely done.

Tess (Goes looking for the story any way.)

Just enough words, just enough image, just enough suggestion to make the poem erotic without seeming to try to be so. I don't know that you need "snake" because the suggestion of snakelike is there without it, but otoh it does add interest and some additional ways to interpret the poem.

I don't know WHAT to say except I would have given it a little green E... I think it's the best I've ever read from you. Makes me want more and that is a wonderful thing for a poem to accomplish. 5 is not high enough.

~ maria

ps, mojo_cat is <i>Gooooood</i>, isn't she :)

Mmmm very erotic with no wasted words

you just got me wet! So little and so much. I love, love, love, love few words that ripen thought, leaving the brain to do the what and why. My brain did a twist a something soaked.

But otherwise fucking fantastic. Smooth moves poetguy!

I thought I'd already commented on this one.

Five.