Sorrel's Long Journey to Love Ch. 07

againnawesome work. but too little and a bit late.please update quickly.

a spanking and a compliment

Please!>>> peak, peek, pique: different words, different meanings.
And buy a bag of commas. Apply liberally.
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Those things being said, this is proving to be a consistently outstanding story. Riveting, and quite unique. Most definitely, I am looking forward to #08.

Looking Forward to the Next...

I really like your story. I hope you have another update soon. Grammatical errors and typos can be a pain, but the story is still good. I like that it has action, drama, a budding romance and a hint of sensuality that feels like it's going to explode at any moment (Fletcher and Sorrel...hint hint) Thanks for sharing your stories! I hope you post more like this. ; )