by humblebumble38
Belongs in fetish, but even there it might have trouble scoring a 3. Here it is a 1._
Somebody should force you to sell your computer. Yuck
fairly exciting. but i kept in mind it's just a story. i think folks might have been looking for a little more in the way of flair and a plot. if it were a true story and you had the sargent joe friday approach of just the facts ma'am and you made that a premise perhaps people would have swallowed it (pardon the pun) a little more. is this your first story?
mark
Thank you for trying, but I honestly didn't find this very good at all. I suggest you read some of the 'How-tos' before submitting any more work, but please keep writing - just do it more carefully and think about what you are typing. 2 *s.
traci
Not even good stroke material, just the same story--Bull.
Next time point out to us where the erotic is - as it is put it in Fetish under Pissing then get a brain roto rooter.<P>
Just sadly sick like you wimpet.
Just getting into the story and it's done
Can you write longer ones ??
That is how a cuckold should treat his wife's bull. We are to serve and please. Hugs and kisses Honey.
a Real Man is in charge?
Putting guys like us in our places is just natural to them, and it’s just what we crave.
Being debased and abused by Her Bull is the reward if we’ve done our duties, not our own orgasms.
For example, a Real Man stayed with us one night, and I awoke on the couch with him fully dressed and towering over me.
He took me by the hand and wordlessly walked me in the bathroom, pushing me down to my knees.
Naturally, I fished out his Man Cock, opened wide, and sucked softly although I was still half asleep.
Then it happened: my mouth was flooded with hot acrid piss!
I tried to swallow and gulp it down, but I choked and coughed.
It just kept coming.
He took one step back to get better aim, hosing me up and down with hot urine from my forehead to my knees.
He paused, gestured for me to turn around, and finished by drenching my pantie covered ass.
He took another step back, put his cock away, and closed the bathroom door.
A Real Man had just made me his private urinal, and I was in total bliss!
I quickly toweled up the floor, rinsed off in the shower, and scurried back to my still sleeping wife in our bed.
I pulled on fresh panties, slid in to bed and spooned with my wife.
As I snuggled with her I realized that he’d left and I never gotten his name or even a chance to thank him for everything.
Real Men take what they want and leave, and guys like us are there to see that they get it.
Hubby is already gone. At the bank he took all the money and closed the credit card accounts. Then the cell phone accounts were closed. Then he took his name off the lease and cancelled the utilities. Next he quit his job, took his retirement account funds and drove off into the sunshine. She never heard from him again and 3 years later she was still struggling to raise enough money to divorce him for abandonment.
The end to a really stupid story.
1 star
A .45 round between the eyes will make it the bulls last visit. Worth it, even at $1.25 per round.
I dream of being just like the cuck. Small penis men Need big strong men to use them. Love this story 4yourpleasureiam
I would love to be the hubby that gets to clean the bull and take his big cock deep in my ass.
The wet dreams of every gay reader here. You hooked quite a few it seems.
But if you were still here )and thankfully you arent) you'd need to change that name to gayblebayble38. You dishonor the humblebumble name Nancy.
Absolute shit. Why is this trash in LW when it should be in Gay Male? Where has this awful modern trend of closet gays masquerading as dominant alpha males come from?