I'd like to see better editing, but that was very, very good. Easily five stars.
Great chapter glad to see them together I hope you update soon so I can know what's happening
I request more, or at least a sequel soon???
omg can you pleeeez come back to daniel and ella! i swear it was one the best stories to read on LitE and now you've just stopped writing it. pleeez come back, your fans are waiting.
Great story. Please finish-- it's to good to leave like this.
I am so into this series, please finish this story.
why did you get banned
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*****
I'd like to see better editing, but that was very, very good.
Easily five stars.
Great chapter
Great chapter glad to see them together I hope you update soon so I can know what's happening
Mas Please?
I request more, or at least a sequel soon???
pleeeez come back!
omg can you pleeeez come back to daniel and ella! i swear it was one the best stories to read on LitE and now you've just stopped writing it. pleeez come back, your fans are waiting.
So Good!!
Great story. Please finish-- it's to good to leave like this.
Finish please
I am so into this series, please finish this story.
why did you get banned
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