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Depressing
A sad sort of tale.
Well done and believable along with being well written, but so fucking sad.
Not my kind of story.
Not into sick fucks who feel killing somebody they once claimed to love because they had sex with somebody else. Probably not even out of love, or maybe the fact is the guy acts like an ass and she went in search of somebody to heal her broken heart. In my opinion, it doesn't matter why she slept with somebody else, I would never even dream of harming my wife. I might just tell her to hook me up with her totally hot friend to make up for it, or I would go in search of my own fuck on the side after letting her know i was doing it. but no way I could kill the woman whom I have held love for in my heart. It doesn't turn off that easy for me.
And then think of this idiot in the story. Yeah, he's a real man alright. Going to get his ass raped in prison, if they don't have the death penalty in his state.
And what's with the idiot watching the film and jerking off over the pussy of the woman he just killed? What an idiot. Anyone who thinks like this, or likes stories like this, is a closet psychopath. And not in a good way.
If not your kind of story, than don't read
So, a whore wife is brought to the dust. Good riddance to garbage. A cuckolded husband who got the ultimate revenge. Hurrah. Not the type of story, through, for those who jack off thinking how great to be a man who has a woman with another's cum in her. Well, fuck off you sicko's.
Mixed felings about this one
The writing was fine, the plot and the telling complete for such a short story. It is more than just a flash of camera vignette. Still there is some, much maybe, wrong with the action. Murder really doesn't fit here.
W.T.F
This story starts nowhere , goes nowhere, and finishs nowhere.
W.T.F
Actually
As a flash story, it was fine. But as a standard one, it lacked the details to help us understand the who, what, when, where, and why of her cheating.
To Anon "than don't read"
First, it's "then don't," not "than don't." Idiot.
"A cuckolded husband who got the ultimate revenge. Hurrah."
Revenge? That's revenge? So going to the gas chamber, electric chair, of getting gang raped in prison for the rest of your life is the way to get revenge? Yes...you're an idiot.
If she is a cheating whore, then she isn't worth losing your life or freedom over. Period.
However, there may be more to the story. Maybe he is a lame fuck. Maybe he is a loser in life and they were about to lose their house because he is a loser. maybe that's why she did a video. To make the mortgage payments. Maybe the sick fuck was reading stories in Loving Wives so he could give the writers a hard time if they wrote cuckold stories and the wife read the browsing history and assumed he wanted her to do that. LOL That would be the ultimate irony if you idiots who stalk the Loving Wives section end up having a wife or girlfriend who finds out what you are reading and decide to act on your "fantasy." LOL
"Not the type of story, through, for those who jack off thinking how great to be a man who has a woman with another's cum in her. Well, fuck off you sicko's."
Ah yes, but it's just fine when the shoe is on the other foot. I've read a great many stories on these boards where the husband has sex with the wife's sister, his stepdaughter, his mother-in-law, his wife's best friend, etc... Yeah, not only is he committing the "ultimate betrayal,' but he is doubling down by doing it with somebody very close to his wife. That's like the wife sleeping with the husband's brother, his dad, his son (her stepson), his best friend, etc...
Heck, just check the story lists. Fucking the wife's sister behind her back is a very popular theme on these boards. Same for schtupping the mother-in-law or step daughter.
Now...oddly, there is no cult following of revenge stories where the wife kills the husband when she catches him, or stories where she just wrecks his life and leaves his future in ashes.
This proves 100% that this whole thing is not about some sense of justice and a hate of betrayal. Not it is motivated by a sense of entitlement and ownership. A wife is not a person but a piece of property.
Human's...people...make mistakes. They do things that they shouldn't in the pursuit of pleasure. If a woman...or man...has sex with somebody else, it doesn't warrant a death sentence. Punishment? Maybe. Depends on the whole situation.
As to the "don't like, don't read it" thing. I would say that this is like the pot calling the kettle black. How many people read and then comment negatively on "slut-wife" stories? How many actually click on them knowing before they even read it that they won't like it? And those stories often have titles and descriptions that are very descriptive to what is in the story. This title was somewhat misleading.
TITLE: Sean's Video - Take 47. DESCRIPTION: Sean watches the video of his wife once again. It alludes to a story where the husband has a video of his wife that he likes watching so much he has watched it 47 times.
Bottom line is, if you think that killing her is justice, you are one of the sick fucks who are responsible for the way men are treated by the law in most domestic law and divorce court situations. Yes, the courts must take into account that there are some seriously unhinged idiots out there that would ruin their own life and future over a woman.
And what about the family? Yeah, when asked, I want to be able to tell people that my son is in prison or on death row for killing his wife. No, I would rather he just leave her and get on his life, and still be a part of our life.
Agree with Porter
started no where, went nowhere, ended up nowhere. Not worth the time reading it in detail.
I guess it was worth the Two Stars I gave it...
but, then again, maybe it wasn't.
A short take
Not exactly my preference but I read it anyway.
Very well written. Your writing style is growing on me.
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