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PLUR Psalms 03

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by GuiltyPleasure02/13/11

I can't.......

....feel comfortable with your formatting - the jerky, disjointed read it creates.

Perhaps it is deliberate but, to me, it's a pity because you throw away some lovely lines that get lost in the rough and tumble of the verses.

Try a new way of presentation, just as an experiment. I don't want you to lose your specific characteristics, just stretch a bit.

Tess

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