I'm confused....who got played??????????? Why the fuck is
it always about the dude and what the hell he thinks?
Somebody clarify this for me. She was in LOVE with him!!
What didn't he get. She gave the gift of herself. Men can be
such numbnutz...........whatever!!! Let's not play my girl like that....please!!!!
English
Omg
You have to continue this story its really good
*****
I think you should get an editor if you want to maximize your potential, but this is worth five stars from me, as is. It's an impressive first effort.
Good story
Can't wait for the next part of the story.
Hard to follow
Kept whipping between first and third person POV, way long paragraphs, and generally muddy writing.
Definitely needs a good editor if this is to become anything.
I love it! Please write more chapters
this is so good! I was absorbed in it so much, i need to read more..hot characters!!!
nice
needs a tiny bit of work but i enjoyed it very much
Good
Only a little bit of a let down at the end but, good story 4 stars
love it
I really do. It was a good story, a bit jumbled, but a good story nonetheless.
love it
cant wait for more
Really? Really?????????????????????/
I'm confused....who got played??????????? Why the fuck is
it always about the dude and what the hell he thinks?
Somebody clarify this for me. She was in LOVE with him!!
What didn't he get. She gave the gift of herself. Men can be
such numbnutz...........whatever!!! Let's not play my girl like that....please!!!!
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