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by GuiltyPleasure02/14/11

Oh thank you!

Finally, a poem I can read and enjoy (I started from the bottom|). Perfect for St. Valentine's Day. Few words, all a reader needs to get the picture.

Tess

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by Angeline02/15/11

Perfect Valentine!

keep it simple and with a few good images to do all the work, just like you did here. :-)

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by vrosej1002/15/11

Economical

Your editing has improved markedly since I have been reading your work. Good stuff.

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