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by Anonymous

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by Koba02/15/11

Magnificent poetry!

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by Angeline02/15/11

A lovely ghost of a poem

the lack of substance is what makes it alluring and impossible to pin down. Seamless.

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by twelveoone02/17/11

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it's probably me, not in the mood mode, 100

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by vrosej1002/18/11

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Cool poem with lots possibilities. Well written with lots of good imagery. My only problem is with the second line. You could have dropped the 'and' and it would have tightened up a lot.

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