by rpsuch
54 Chapters for one story on Literotica.com is far too long especially when most of the chapters are only 1 page long! The story and its length become very boring and dull after a period of time! When will it ever end?
The next chapter, where the true nature of both families will be revealed to one and all. Should be fun.
Ah yes, short chapters. I too would like to see longer ones, but at least I get a fix on a relatively frequent schedule the way it is now.
I've been faithfully reading this story and I do beleive I can smell the dinner they are cooking.I sure hope the Goldbergs straighten out the Fine family(not so fine father)and get on with the preps. for the nuptials. Ciao
Ignore previous Anonymous who feels the story is too long. It is great. I look forward to each new chapter, like a new day in life itself. Your skill has made them seem a part of my world, enriching it immensely. Thank you so very much.
If 54 chapters are too long for you, why in the hell are you even taking time to respond? Your time has to be to valuble to waste reading.
and you are afraid to use your name. lol
That is not a comment. That is only you self promoting.
I have enjoyed this more than any other story I have read in this forum. Keep them coming.
I deliberately stayed away so I would be able to read all of the chapters in one rush. But, now I am at the end! Ahh!!!! :)
I am very much looking forward to future stories from you. Thank alot!
Hoping for another up from the Fines. It's time to make them human. Your story can go a long way yet. He's no longer Willie Boy and she is no longer Princess Ashley. Love it...